The importance of innovation
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Innovation which means a ability to create new things to make our life better. In China,governments make no efforts to encourage talents to innovate.
But why innovation plays a so important role in 21st century? From my perspective,there are three reasons. For a country, innovation can improve economy and international power. For society, innovation make it full of energy. For individual, innovation spire people to use their knowledge. And the results of innovation will change people’s traditional life style to make our life better.
Therefore,innovation is significant.
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- Lack of transition words;
- Consecutive sentences start with the same word.
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