The internet dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
-
January 27, 2020 at 7:46 am
The internet dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changes have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive. What are your opinions on this?
The improvement of the internet makes our lives so different in terms of basis life styles, the methods of obtaining data, the economic conditions and other aspects. It is true that internet technology effects modern life both well and badly in many aspects. In my opinion, internet is not only effective but also changeable, and the few negative aspects are tolerant.
The internet obviously has positive effects. It can help people find information more easily (people used to find data and messages from the library). For bachelors, they could create new easies effectively and even public more useful conclusions, which could be applied onto factories, medical manufactory, teaching methods and so on. Obviously, those new contents sometimes help people work and live in a convenient way. Besides, the internet also makes individuals communicate with each other more conveniently. Everyone could call their parents with an online video although long distance exists between them. No one has not benefit from the computer tools such as WeChat that this kind of tools could provide messages as soon as possible through the internet.
Negative influences also exist on the using of internet. Firstly, easily finding information also means, students could find the answer of their homework from the internet in a minute. Few of them would spend time solving the problems by themselves while the most just write down those internet answers on their papers, whatever the answer is right or wrong. On the other hand, some messages on the internet are visual and fake, children and teenagers are unable to identify that kind of information, it is possible mistakes leading the group and cause some crimes.
The consequence caused by internet is commonly acceptable by the public, while a number of achievements made civilians life changed and developed. Thus, I personally believe the overall effect of this technology on internet has been positive.
January 28, 2020 at 3:39 amScore: 52.7
Issues:
- Nearly 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Reduce it to 20%- by shortening/splitting sentences.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
January 30, 2020 at 2:08 pmThe improvement of the internet makes our lives so different. people’s daily life styles changed, the methods of obtaining data improved, the economic and other professional aspects developed.In my opinion,a few disadvantages about the effective internet are tolerated.
The internet is obviously positive. It can help people find information more easily.People used to find data and messages from the library. Finder used to stand in front of the book-rack for a long time. Specifically,bachelors could write new papers to solve social problems more effectively than before. This kind of trend is actually beneficial for society. Besides,the internet also makes individuals communicate with each other more conveniently. Everyone could call their parents with an online video although they are far away from each other. No one has not been benefit from the computer tools such as We-chat. These kind of tools could delivery messages as soon as possible through the internet.
Negative influences also exist on the using of internet. Firstly, easily finding information also means, students could find the answer of their homework from the internet in a minute. Few of them would spend time solving the problems by themselves.The most,at the same time, just write down those internet answers on their papers, whatever those answers are right or wrong. On the other hand, some messages on the internet are misguided and fake, children and teenagers are unable to identify them. it is possible leading the group by mistake and sometimes caused crimes.
The consequence caused by internet is commonly acceptable by the public, while a number of achievements made civilians life changed and developed. Thus, I personally believe the overall effect of this technology on internet has been positive.
February 4, 2020 at 3:45 amScore: 50.7
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.
