Reply To: Should we follow fashion?

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EuStemJobs Grant Seeker
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University: University of Wisconsin
October 14, 2020 at 3:57 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Verb form errors
  3. Preposition errors
  4. Make your argument clear in your introduction, for what reason are you making your argument?

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