Reply To: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Reply To: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 14, 2020 at 4:13 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Make your argument clear in the introduction, why is it positive?
  4. Article errors
  5. Spelling errors

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