Reply To: Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development Reply To: Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 14, 2020 at 4:17 pm

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Issues:

  1. Article errors
  2. Spelling errors
  3. Make your argument clear in the introduction – what is your argument and what is some short reasoning?
  4. Wordy – simplify and remove unnecessary words
  5. Word choice error

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