Reply To: Developing countries require help offered by international organizations to ensure healthy and sustainable development

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 14, 2020 at 4:17 pm

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Issues:

  1. Article errors
  2. Spelling errors
  3. Make your argument clear in the introduction – what is your argument and what is some short reasoning?
  4. Wordy – simplify and remove unnecessary words
  5. Word choice error

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