Reply To: Employers should give their staff at least four weeks’ holiday a year to make employees do better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Employers should give their staff at least four weeks’ holiday a year to make employees do better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree Reply To: Employers should give their staff at least four weeks’ holiday a year to make employees do better at their jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree

October 14, 2020 at 4:23 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Provide reasoning for your argument in the introduction – why do you agree?
  3. Spelling errors
  4. Article errors

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.