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University: University of Wisconsin
October 15, 2020 at 2:25 pm

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  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Make your argument clear in your introduction, why is this logic problematic? Provide some short reasoning.
  3. Article errors

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