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University: University of Wisconsin
October 15, 2020 at 2:31 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Article errors

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