Reply To: Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 15, 2020 at 2:35 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Part of speech errors
  3. Add a transition sentence at the end of your introduction that shortly provides some reasoning for your argument

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