Reply To: Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places.
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October 15, 2020 at 2:35 pm
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 40% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
- Part of speech errors
- Add a transition sentence at the end of your introduction that shortly provides some reasoning for your argument
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.