Reply To: All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. Reply To: All university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is.

October 15, 2020 at 3:17 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Make your argument clearer in your introduction
  3. Article errors
  4. Spelling errors

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