Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays. Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 15, 2020 at 3:35 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
  2. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  3. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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