Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends. Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 15, 2020 at 3:49 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
  2. About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  3. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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