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University: University of Wisconsin
October 15, 2020 at 4:13 pm

Score: 54.7

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Summarize reasons in the first paragraph.
  3. Use your own words to write.

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