Reply To: It is important to keep old friends than it is to make new friends.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 15, 2020 at 8:33 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 70% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Lots of verbose sentences and grammatical errors. 

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