Reply To: Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Reply To: Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 15, 2020 at 9:20 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words. 

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