Reply To: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Reply To: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 16, 2020 at 2:51 pm

Score: 58.5

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Word choice errors – simplify some language
  3. Wordy – remove unnecessary words to make your essay clearer

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