Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Because modern life is very complex, it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 16, 2020 at 3:28 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
  2. About 10% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Article errors
  4. Spelling errors

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