Reply To: For success in a future job, the ability to relate well to people is more important than studying hard in school. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 16, 2020 at 3:30 pm

Score: 43.1

Issues:

  1. About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Wordy – simplify sentences by removing unnecessary words

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