Reply To: It is easier for parents to raise children today than it was 50 years ago
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October 19, 2020 at 3:28 pm
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
- Article errors
- Plural versus singular errors
- State your argument clearly in your introduction and include some short reasoning, why is it more demanding nowadays?
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