Reply To: It is easier for parents to raise children today than it was 50 years ago

October 19, 2020 at 3:28 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Article errors
  3. Plural versus singular errors
  4. State your argument clearly in your introduction and include some short reasoning, why is it more demanding nowadays?

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.