Reply To: It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours Reply To: It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 19, 2020 at 3:47 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 80% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Capitalization errors
  3. Punctuation and spacing errors – add a space after every comma and period (, .)

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