Reply To: Students are more influenced by their teachers than by their friends. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 19, 2020 at 4:03 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
  2. Make your argument clear in your introduction – perhaps shortly state the two main reasons
  3. Only use one transition phrase per sentence

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