Reply To: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Teachers were more appreciated and valued by society in the past than they are nowadays.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 19, 2020 at 4:09 pm

Score: 54.9

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Refer to the above partial revisions, some errors are still in the essay
  3. Preposition errors
  4. Spacing errors

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