Reply To: Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Reply To: Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 19, 2020 at 4:16 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Preposition errors

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