Reply To: Some people argue that the development of technology is making our lives too complex

Score: 45.2

Issues:

1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
3. Refer to the previous suggestion about your introduction

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.