Reply To: In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying

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Issues:

1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
3. Singular versus plural errors

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.