Reply To: Some people think that men and women have different qualities

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 19, 2020 at 4:30 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Formatting errors
  3. Article errors

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