Reply To: The government should spend money on railways rather than roads

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 19, 2020 at 4:34 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Article errors
  3. Plural versus singular errors
  4. Spelling errors

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