Reply To: Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money Reply To: Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 19, 2020 at 4:37 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Spelling errors
  3. Rewrite your introduction – clearly state your argument do not just restate the prompt

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