Reply To: Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money
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October 19, 2020 at 4:37 pm
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
- Spelling errors
- Rewrite your introduction – clearly state your argument do not just restate the prompt
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