Reply To: Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 19, 2020 at 4:37 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Spelling errors
  3. Rewrite your introduction – clearly state your argument do not just restate the prompt

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.