Reply To: In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.
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October 21, 2020 at 3:09 pm
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
- About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
- Word choice errors
- Many sentences are unclear
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