Reply To: The university will spend money on a dormitory to improve the life quality of students, which of the following do you think is the best way?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing The university will spend money on a dormitory to improve the life quality of students, which of the following do you think is the best way? Reply To: The university will spend money on a dormitory to improve the life quality of students, which of the following do you think is the best way?

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 21, 2020 at 3:20 pm

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Issues:

  1. Word choice errors
  2. State your argument clearly in your introduction and provide some supporting reasoning
  3. Simplify language

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