Reply To: At university, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 21, 2020 at 3:23 pm

Score: 41.6

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. State your argument clearly in your introduction and provide some short reasoning
  3. Word choice errors

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