Reply To: At university, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing At university, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support Reply To: At university, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support

October 21, 2020 at 3:23 pm

Score: 41.6

Issues:

  1. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. State your argument clearly in your introduction and provide some short reasoning
  3. Word choice errors

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