Reply To: At university, sports and social activities are just as important as classes and libraries and should receive equal financial support
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October 21, 2020 at 3:23 pm
Score: 41.6
Issues:
- About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
- State your argument clearly in your introduction and provide some short reasoning
- Word choice errors
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