Reply To: Today more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Today more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Reply To: Today more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 21, 2020 at 3:46 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Preposition errors
  4. Clearly state your argument and provide some short reasoning in your introduction

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.