Reply To: Today more and more people use robots to do tasks at home and at work. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Score: ungraded

Issues:

1. About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
3. Preposition errors
4. Clearly state your argument and provide some short reasoning in your introduction

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.