Reply To: Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 21, 2020 at 3:48 pm

Score: 46.7

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Preposition errors
  3. Article errors

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