Reply To: The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones

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October 21, 2020 at 3:55 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 110 words.
  3. Word choice errors
  4. Article errors
  5. Singular vs. plural errors

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