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University: University of Wisconsin
October 22, 2020 at 3:04 am

Score: ungraded

Problems:

  1. Lengthy essay. Restrict your essay to 300 -320 words. A lengthy essay can result in a bad score;
  2. Lengthy paragraph. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
  3. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Restrict to 15%.

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