Reply To: There are two kinds of classes offered in the school: small class with fewer students (professors may remember all students’ names), and big classes with more students.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing There are two kinds of classes offered in the school: small class with fewer students (professors may remember all students’ names), and big classes with more students. Reply To: There are two kinds of classes offered in the school: small class with fewer students (professors may remember all students’ names), and big classes with more students.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 24, 2020 at 3:18 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Lots of grammatical errors and redundancies. 

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