Reply To: People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Reply To: People who develop many different skills are more successful than people who focus on one skill only. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 24, 2020 at 3:38 pm

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Issues:

  1. About 80% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 60% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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