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University: University of Wisconsin
October 24, 2020 at 11:38 pm

Score: 56.5

Issues:

  1. About 50% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.

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