Reply To: Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money Reply To: Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 25, 2020 at 12:36 am

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Issues:

  1. About 30% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words. 

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