Reply To: The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider. The rich get richer, and the poor are even poorer. What problems can the situation cause? And give the solutions.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider. The rich get richer, and the poor are even poorer. What problems can the situation cause? And give the solutions. Reply To: The gap between the rich and the poor is becoming wider. The rich get richer, and the poor are even poorer. What problems can the situation cause? And give the solutions.

October 25, 2020 at 12:42 am

Score: 50.1

Issues:

  1. About 35% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Lots of absolute statements.

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