Reply To: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation? Reply To: In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 25, 2020 at 1:14 am

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Lots of grammatical errors. 
  2. About 40% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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