Reply To: If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. › TOEFL Writing › If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. › Reply To: If people have the opportunity to get a secure job, they should take it right away rather than wait for a job that would be more satisfying. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
October 26, 2020 at 8:18 pm
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 45% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
- Most sentences are unclear.
I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.