Reply To: Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money
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October 27, 2020 at 8:26 pm
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- One paragraph is lengthy. Restrict it to 90 words.
- Rewrite the introductory paragraph using your own words.
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