Reply To: Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. IELTS Writing Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money Reply To: Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 27, 2020 at 8:26 pm

 

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Issues:

  1. One paragraph is lengthy. Restrict it to 90 words. 
  2. Rewrite the introductory paragraph using your own words. 

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