Reply To: Many people think the government should spend money exploring outer space, while others believe that it is a waste of public money

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October 27, 2020 at 8:26 pm

 

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. One paragraph is lengthy. Restrict it to 90 words. 
  2. Rewrite the introductory paragraph using your own words. 

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