Reply To: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study.
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October 27, 2020 at 8:33 pm
Score: ungraded
Issues:
- About 55% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
- About 35% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
- Lengthy essay. Simplify verbose sentences.
- Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 110 words.
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