Reply To: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. GRE Writing Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. Reply To: Universities should require every student to take a variety of courses outside the student’s field of study. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim.

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University: University of Wisconsin
October 27, 2020 at 8:38 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 80% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 20% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.

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