Reply To: Always telling the truth is the most important consideration in any relationship between people. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 2, 2020 at 9:06 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 15% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Article errors
  4. State your argument in your introduction – now it is too wordy

I will send you screenshots to illustrate specific problems/errors.