Reply To: Universities should spend more money supporting social activities rather than improving the canteen food.

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 2, 2020 at 9:12 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Outline your argument in your introduction, why is it a preferrable option?
  2. Write in complete sentences
  3. Word choice errors

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