Reply To: Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Do you think this is a good idea?

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 2, 2020 at 9:15 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. Why is it a wonderful method? Add supporting information to your introduction
  2. Verb form errors
  3. Article errors
  4. Singular versus plural errors

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