Reply To: The rules that societies today expect young people to follow and obey are too strict.

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 2, 2020 at 9:15 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. About 40% of the sentences are passive. Convert some of them into their active counterparts.
  3. Subject-verb agreement errors
  4. Support your argument in the introduction – why do you agree?

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