Reply To: It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts

TOEFL, IELTS, Personal Statement and CV Proofreading Services. TOEFL Writing It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts Reply To: It is more important for students to understand ideas and concepts than it is for them to learn facts

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University: University of Wisconsin
November 2, 2020 at 10:29 pm

Score: ungraded

Issues:

  1. About 40% of the sentences exceed 20 words. Shorten/split them.
  2. Article errors
  3. Lengthy paragraphs. Restrict each paragraph to 90 words.
  4. Introduction paragraph repeats itself, keep it simple and short – state your argument and give some supporting information